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The scary thing here is someone thought they could screw with Sahlia's investment...
I have a Halloween story, in a city of superheroes that's hard as crap to pull off but I did it anyway. I was trying to do something in the vein of a slasher film gone horribly wrong since Sahlia pays attention and is stronger than most people expect. I hope this works...
Some of these guys just wanted to trick or treat in
The old business doesn't want to piss off Sahlia at all:
Writing and Sahlia by
Editing by
Sahlia's character creation rules by Wizards of the Coast
I have a Halloween story, in a city of superheroes that's hard as crap to pull off but I did it anyway. I was trying to do something in the vein of a slasher film gone horribly wrong since Sahlia pays attention and is stronger than most people expect. I hope this works...
Some of these guys just wanted to trick or treat in
The old business doesn't want to piss off Sahlia at all:
Writing and Sahlia by
Editing by
Sahlia's character creation rules by Wizards of the Coast
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Overall, this was a fun story. You managed to take a number of traditional horror-story cliches and turn them on their ear, which accounts for the high scores on Vision and Originality- it's not unique, but it's a difficult line to balance and you did it well.
I'm a bit of a snob when it comes to use and abuse of the English language. You weren't perfect, here, but you did better than most- better than I often do, and you were working under a deadline.
Finally, it's a story that shows off how ruthless Sahlia is. Sahlia is one of your best characters, in my opinion, and every story that gives a little more insight into how she thinks and operates is to be welcomed.